Saturday, June 26, 2010



Hannah said...

Awesome! The kid's hand and part of the string disappear into the far sidewalk. I wish there were some kind of defining lines in the man's feet and shirt. Great dumpster, but I think you could have some kind of grungy looking stuff ekking out of it, or something, it just looks too clean. I'd really like to see the balloon more transparent. Le woman's dress blends in with the road, either darken it or lighten it, or something like that. Hmmm... I think the man in the yellow shirt should have some kind of face. He's just out far enough from the wall to look weird without a face, so I'd say either give him a face or scoot him a little more behind the wall. Also, the value of the woman's hair is too similar to the value of the wall behind her. Ok, one last thing, I think the bottom left corner is missing something, it needs like a puddle or a flattened cardboard box or a trash can or something to cover that corner and go off the format. Sorry that was so long, I hope it helped!

Sharon said...

I was so excited when I saw the long paragraph haha but yeah, This is so perfect!! Everything you've said makes so much sense. This is really helpful. :) Thank you